plans for magazine: sketches, mock ups etc

This is my analysis of my own front cover, double page and contents page. I have done this to show what the magazine pages will be like and to also show that it needs alot of improvement.

When I got my feedback I choose to change my picture as my other front cover wasn't producing enough attitude to make the reader or viewer want to read more into the magazine. If the picture produces attitude and their is a story about the person on the picture you would want to read on to find out the story about him to see why he is pulling attitude. Also their is writing on the page you can not see because it is in white like background. This will be changed as i correct my front cover.